lesteverFeatured By OwnerJan 2, 2012Professional Digital Artist
Lovely color use mate! I really like her facial expressions too! A little suggestion from me? Instead of having two red lights at the bottom, If you move one of them near her left arm, would be great, in my opinion. Because, red is the hottest/attractive color in this piece, and the point of the interest would be clearly defined. Either way I really do like it!
It probably is a bit off. I can't see it though (cause I drew it.) It's mainly the underskirt covering her thighs. There isn't a strong source of lighting so it was hard to give it the full 3-D-ness it deserved without making it a light-colored fabric... but making it a light colored fabric would diminish the brilliance of her lighting-defying skin... so.
I would say... if you must want critique -- practice more and be meticulous. From what I can see of your pictures, I feel like you didn't take enough time on them. Aside from that, please consult proportion charts for anime characters because I notice the heads being too big. Remember all your principles of design (line, shape, color, etc.) Take more notice of the weight of your lines and think more like an artist than a designer. Reconsider the meaning of 'beauty.' Above all, always strive to make each picture you draw at least 5 times better than the picture you drew before. It it means taking 5 times longer and putting in 5 times more detail, do so.